I know, I know. Every time Heath comes back into the world of House of Night, it’s a double-edged sword. I would argue he’s the books’ worst-written character (which is saying something, given the competition for that particular distinction) but sometimes he crosses the line into so-bad-it’s-hilarious territory.
This time is – weirdly – neither of those. It’s something much, much better. He spends half a chapter telling Zoey she’s awful.
House of Night: Untamed Chapter 18
Zoey spent the last chapter insisting that they go to a fried chicken restaurant, so it’s a little weird that this chapter starts off with… Zoey mocking people who go to fried chicken restaurants…
as late as it was, Charlie’s was really busy, and sheeplike, we jostled around with the rest of the herd animals, finally getting in line behind an obese woman who had really bad teeth and a balding guy who smelled like feet.
You wanted to come here, Zoey. You are the sheep too. This is why Ariel and I spend all our time writing about how you have zero self-awareness.
Zoey mocks Aphrodite, telling her that Darius is too good for her. This unexpectedly leads to a rare (albeit decreasingly rare) open moment for Aphrodite where she admits, “Of course he’s too good for me”, and talks about how she knows that she’s an awful person. Although it’s the Casts writing a moment of awareness, so the moment is… sudden…
“I’m selfish, not stupid. Darius will probably get sick of my crap within a couple months. I’ll dump him right before he dumps me, but at least it’ll be a fun ride till then.”
“Did you ever think about being nice and not putting him through your usual crap?”
Aphrodite met my eyes. “Actually, I have been thinking about it and may consider changing things up with Darius.”
Wait, that’s it?
Okay, wait, if all it takes is a single sentence suggestion in this book for someone to seriously contemplate the way they live their life, can someone please tell Zoey, “Did you ever think about not hooking up with three guys at the same time and then wondering why they all hate you?” Because that could have saved us literally four books.
Aphrodite also talks about how meaningful it was that the cat chose her earlier. Zoey talks about how meaningful greasy fried food is.
Now, don’t get me wrong. Even though I was shoveling in the chicken and fries ’cause we needed to get back to school and it was rude to lounge around while Darius babysat Aphrodite’s cat from hell, I savored every bite. […]
Aphrodite picked delicately at a drumstick and wrinkled her nose at me when I added salt to the already totally salty fries. “You’re going to bloat like a dead fish.”
“If I do, I’ll just wear sweats until I pee it out.” I grinned around a big bite of chicken.
Kristin and P.C. Cast. Stop. This is disgusting. You haven’t created a silly and quirky character. You have to dial it back.
[Aphrodite] shuddered. “You’re so gross. I cannot believe we’re friends, which proves I’m in the middle of a personal crisis.”
Your words, book.
Zoey and Aphrodite debate the next steps in the plot, including:
- Setting up a nanny cam so they can monitor for when/if Stark’s dead body reanimates as a zombie fledgling. (For some reason Aphrodite assumes this is a complicated endeavor and asks “Isn’t that Jack kid good with electronics”. Hell if I know literally anything about Jack, Aphrodite.)
- How they’ll get blood for Stark if he does wake up, since the undead zombies need it more. This also reminds Aphrodite to ask Zoey if “the bloodsucking-back-and-forth stuff” is “a lot like sex”, “maybe even better” like it says in “the Sociology book”. Once again, I have a lot of questions about the vampyre educational system.
- Zoey fills Aphrodite in on Operation “Use The Cleansing Ceremony To Reveal The Undead Vampyres’ Existence With A Dramatic Stevie Rae Reveal”. Aphrodite is pretty chill about it, and immediately picks up on how Zoey’s mostly doing this now because “You’re counting on Shekinah saving your ass”. She also says it “sounds very B movie”, because the Casts still get self-deprecation confused with self-awareness.
- Zoey also talks about how something in the night is scary. I’m having trouble caring about the corporeal threats in this book, so I’m not bothering summarizing this.
Ok. Now that that business is out of the way, ready for the good stuff? Because motherfuckin’ HEATH is back!
a familiar laugh made me glance up at the entrance to the dining room. […] He was carrying a tray filled with his favorite combo meal (the Number 3, with extra-large fries), along with a tiny kids’ meal. You know, one of those meals that girls get when they’re on a date so they look like they don’t eat much, and then they go home and snarf down the refrigerator when they’re alone.
This book has the strangest ideas for what count as universal experiences.
Heath sees Zoey and tells the girl that he’s with that he has to go talk to her.
I knew Heath. Yes, he’d break up with me, but (unlike Erik) there wouldn’t be any public name-calling that might cause an ugly scene. Heath’s mom and dad had raised him right. He was a gentleman
Wow, I have a lot of questions about this:
- Why does he still have to break up with her, exactly? He was aware that she was seriously dating him while she was seriously dating someone else, and then cheated on both of them again with a third guy. I think any breaking that could possibly need to be done here is pretty much done.
- “Heath’s mom and dad had raised him right. He was a gentleman.” Wasn’t the entire first book about how Zoey hated him for being a loser who spent all his time getting drunk? When did any gentleman-ing happen?
Heath slowly talks with Zoey about how their Imprint is broken, asking how that could have happened. But he totally already knows, and… shit gets rough.
I drew a deep breath and said, “It was broken when I Imprinted with someone else.” […]
his face jerked up as if I’d slapped him. […] “You did it with him.”
Guys. This gets really good. Not only is Heath in this scene finally calling out Zoey for cheating on him, but unlike how Erik had to slut shame Zoey in front of all her friends to do it, Heath is doing it like a BOSS.
“How could you, Zo? How could you do that to me? To us?”
“I’m sorry, Heath. I never meant to hurt you. I just—”
“No! […] Didn’t mean to hurt me is bullshit.”
This whole chapter is music to my ears. Aphrodite even tries to point out that Heath is clearly with someone else right now, and Heath points out not only that it’s just a friend, but someone who used to be Zoey’s friend. And then the former friend Zoey didn’t even recognize awkwardly waves at them. And Aphrodite shuts up at that terrible attempt at standing up for her shitty friend. This chapter is gold, you guys. Like, this is why a small part of me suspects that the Casts don’t even like Zoey, because this chapter is dishing out some sick Zoey burns that I am jealous of.
“You didn’t even call me.”
“I wanted to,” I said miserably.
“Oh, wait. You did text-message me this morning. Thanks so much for that,” he said sarcastically.
But the best part is yet to come.
“Do you know what happens to the human when an Imprint breaks?” […]
“It— it causes the human pain,” I said.
“Pain? Talk about an understatement. Zoey, I thought you were dead at first. And when I thought that, I wished I was dead, too. […] But I knew you weren’t dead because I could feel some of what was happening to you.” He grimaced. “Some of what he was making you feel.”
So. Apparently. Because of vampyre magic, Heath somehow could literally feel his girlfriend having sex with another guy. You know, maybe Heath isn’t being brutal enough. Like, this sounds horrible enough that when Heath goes on about how much he has always loved Zoey, I’m not even thinking, “Why?”. I’m a bit distracted by this whole “I could feel what he was making you feel” thing.
“I’ve loved you since I was in grade school. You being with someone else hurts me. No way it can’t.” […]
I could only say, “I was wrong. I’m sorry.”
He shook his head again. “Sorry isn’t good enough, Zo. Not this time. Not about this.”
Having sat through three and a half books of Zoey being just the worst person to everyone she knows and never even really getting any particular comeuppance for any of it, I think I speak for all of our readers when I say:
“I fell in love with you in third grade. I loved you then. I love you and want you now; I probably will forever.” Heath’s eyes were bright with unshed tears. “But I don’t ever want to see you again. Loving you hurts too much, Zoey.”
I mean… to a certain degree.
With those words, Heath gets up with his friend, leaves, and “Heath walked out of my life”. This is the best chapter of House of Night ever.
With those words, Heath gets up with his friend, leaves, and “Heath walked out of my life”. This is the best chapter of House of Night ever.
….hoooooooo boy. You’re not going to like what happens with Heath after book eight in the series.
oh my god there are more than eight books in this series?
You guys all keep dropping hints about things that happen later. I WANT TO KNOW. You’re going to make me read way ahead, and then it’s hard to blog about the books like I don’t know what’s going to happen. It’s torture!
Oh all right, I guess I’ll throw you a bone. :p
Reincarnation. No, thankfully it has jack all to do with Buddhism.
@Cara: there are, ah, twelve books in the series. I spend more time reading on the House of Night wiki than I should, but whenever I ask myself why the hell I’m reading about yet another stupid, one-dimensional character on the fan wiki, I just remind myself of their biography for Zoey. And then all becomes well again.
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Heath is throwing some sick fires, bro.
Do you think Aphrodite would’ve stuck up for Zoey if she knew how many times Zoey had called her a ho in the last chapter?
So uh. Holy Shit. Zoey basically spiritually raped Heath. Right? Not only was he acutely aware of what was going on as soon as it happened, he was also feeling excruciating pain? And Zoey was totally aware that that would happen! I don’t understand how Zoey is supposed to be relatable. I mean, the Casts introduce the imprint as something important and special, and when Zoey gets that she bitches about it because she doesn’t actually like Heath? So she cheats on him twice? Causing him physical pain? AND SHE’S THE HERO? This was a well-deserved beat-down – I just wish we lived in a world where the Casts used this opportunity to make Zoey a better character, where instead I know in my heart of hearts that the second undead-Stark comes back she’s gonna be macking all over him.
And already in the next chapter it’s right back to “ugh boys are the WORST”, so, yeah, never a moment of character growth for Zoey
My problem with this phrasing is that what happened to Heath was a direct result of trusted adult Loren seducing underage student Zoey. It’s not so much that Zoey raped Heath, as it is that Loren organized a menage-a-trois with one participant (Heath) unwilling and another (Zoey) unable to consent. Zoey is still awful, but in this particular case, her awfulness only manifested as a reaction to Loren’s awfulness, aided and abetted by Neferet’s awfulness, forming just this huge Gordian knot of awful. This is a depressing book, you guys.
My issue with this chapter is “obese woman with bad teeth”.
Doesnt it just bother anyone how easily overweight people are stereotyped all the time as the eternal ugly ducklings almost always found lurking at fast food joints?
If she’s “the pretty blonde with gorgeous blue eyes” then her antithesis would the “obese woman with bad teeth.”
Im not overweight but as a person who faced racism at school, i think perpetuating stereotypes is disgusting. We should be educating kids to look past appearancs and like a person for who they are, not what they look like. I MEAN FOR GOODNESS SAKE Isnt one cast member a school teacher? what the heck is she teaching her kids?? This entire series is based on the most judgemental, hypocritical character I’ve ever had the misfortune of reading about.
Forgive me for ranting on but it just really hit me that Cast 1 is a person entrusted with imparting knowledge and wisdom onto future generations and this is what she does? I could…i mean….arrr…I’m just so….upset lol. This entire series…i mean from stereotyping gay people, to making fun of muslims with the whole jihad thing to subtly making racist remarks about black people etc etc. This series is horrendous.
I totally agree and wish I thought to say something about it. If you’re interested in something about how fat shaming is the only “acceptable” stigma in society, but a little more uplifting, I actually wrote a bit for NPR a few years ago about body positivity and Rocky Horror
http://www.npr.org/sections/monkeysee/2013/10/15/210545827/rocky-horror-and-body-positivity-at-midnight
Thank you, i just finished reading it 🙂 although I’ve never seen the rocky horror show dont kill me Lol. I was introduced to American pop culture in my mid teens, so I’ve yet to explore the 80’s era fully. But it’s great to see people learning to be comfortabe in their own skin.
I still think its sad though that people have to “learn” to be comfortable with their bodies. I mean come on, making a person feel like crap because their body doesnt conform with what society deems beautiful? when did the world become so effing shallow?
As a heavy chick, I thank you for this comment, Anonymous. I hate that stereotype as well, and I hate that PC Cast is a teacher and a parent. She is too immature for that kind of responsibility.
By the way, my teeth are in good shape, and I only eat fast food occasionally. I also love jogging and can run up to 6 miles. I dare the Casts to try to fat-shame me. I will literally run circles around them.
I’m glad people are pointing this out. I really should have caught that one, and I’ll be more mindful of this topic in the future.
My husband made a really good point yesterday, in my post on Thursday there was a line where Zoey’s like “That’s too liberal, even for me.” When meanwhile, she perpetuates stereotypes across the board and is exhaustingly narrow-minded.
I feel like the line in this chapter is like, “I’m a hot, young vampyre so when I get fast food it’s totally cool. But these fat slobs should go home, ew.” Fuck off, Zoey. What did that line even add to the story? Did it paint a colorful picture of the world around Zoey? Is it a big neon sign flashing that actually the Casts know Zoey is terrible?
No problem Ms. Layton.
I was ridiculed for my nationality and my religion so I’ve grown up with this intense loathing for any form of discrimination. People really need to speak up more, i mean its rubbish like this that impressionable young minds read, and then they think that sort of thinking/behaviour is ok. Somebody should write an open letter or something to PC cast on the damage she is inflicting.
No idea if it’s entirely relevant to your argument, but I do recall seeing a post/open letter on The Book Lantern criticizing the Casts on their use of the word “r****d”. To my knowledge the Casts have never apologized for their reliance on ableist slurs. The only thing I can add to any of that is that I hope the Casts fall off the literary radar for good and never publish anything for mass consumption again. If I wanted to hear people draw judgments about all and sundry, I’d go eavesdrop on the conversations that the people around me have.
I meant to up vote this! Sorry!
Wasn’t the entire first book about how Zoey hated him for being a loser who spent all his time getting drunk? When did any gentleman-ing happen?
There has to be some kind of twist. Heath and Zoey’s relationship with him changes every sentence. She is in love, she is only casually dating him, she hates him and wants to dump him etc. Heath must be some magical creature that can influence Zoey’s memory or he must be an imaginary boyfriend. Has he interacted with anybody aside from Zoey and her friend from the first book? And that friend can also be imaginary. They hang out with Zoey before she was super special, and I cannot think of any reason why someone would want to hang out with Zoey. So Heath keeps changing because Zoey wants to imagine him in a certain situation, and it does not matter because he is not real. The ‘House of Night is a mental hospital theory’ keeps making more sense than the actual book…
Heath is obviously groundhog-daying his whole life in his eternal quest to get into Zoeys pants for whatever inexplicable reason. He rewrites who and what he is every book and after each rewrite it has always been true. I bet two more volumes down the line he will always have been the High President Head Honcho of the local chess club and will help Zoey solve some vaguely chess-related problem or so. Before he becomes child genius Prof. Dr. Dr. Heath and builds a atomic anti-Neferet pump gun in the series finale.
And then they will have slightly yucky sex.
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